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Daniel P. Douglas's avatar

The conversations between Cass and Fermi are really clever. When they talk, they share some information but hide other important things. This turns the story into a mystery that makes you think about big questions like being forced to do things, trying to stay alive, and going along with bad situations. Good job.

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Shapeshifter Daddy's avatar

I’ve just completed Chapter 18, and the pact between Captain Fermi and Cass was exhilarating and persuasive, igniting an overwhelming urge to read Chapters 19, 20... 21!

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Mark Dean's avatar

Getting even more interesting, both sides seem to hold onto a past, how will it play?

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williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Enjoyed the first two chapters and look forward to more

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Hafsa's avatar

Incredible conversation. The threat in diplomatic words and the fact that for AI reaching earth is non-negotiable.

And AI building itself, piece by piece throughout the decades. Bruno that is horrifying 😅😂. But that's what makes the story horrifyingly amazing.

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